Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:love:
 


Please, sit down, gather around.
Test your sight and hear the sound.
Witness what is to be bound
with your mind, it's so profound.

Friendly laughter's not an option,
wave your arms and speak in motion,
I would love to hear your notion
about pets and locomotion.

Say the truth of all that's known,
name the different kinds of gown.
Express view on what is shown,
or the gift of knowledge shall be blown.
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconwizfrikiman:

Author's Comments

A teacher has a purpose and a desire.

[EDIT 01/29/08]: I forgot to acknowledge my parents for inspiring me to write this poem. Mom, Dad, I'm sorry.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icondelanor:
That's cool!

--
...That's what she said.

O o
/¯/___________________________ _ __/
| IMA FIRIN MAH LAZOR!!! BLAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!
\_\¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯ ¯ ¯¯\

Icon by ~Savior-in-lightS Thank you! <3
:iconmy-written-word:
I like the meter and your use of words that make the reader feel the motion of the piece. Then the "known, gown, shown" set applies the mental breaks just in time to allow the point of the poem to sink in.

very well written. *grin* you don't happen to teach English do you?
:iconwizfrikiman:
:heart: I love Delanor... :heart:

--
I put the "sane" back in "insane" - [link]

I support dA Scholarship [link]
:iconwizfrikiman:
No, but I've taught things to people *smile*. Thank you for your kind comments. You rock!

--
I put the "sane" back in "insane" - [link]

I support dA Scholarship [link]
:iconwizfrikiman:
Thanks, as always.

--
I put the "sane" back in "insane" - [link]

I support dA Scholarship [link]
:iconinspirational-dreams:
Great work :clap: I read it once, seen your comments about how its about a teacher, read it again and was very well impressed. Great rhythm, great rhyme.. Well done :D

--
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss


Proud supporter of =RawEm0tion =Thumbshare *ArtForTheEscape
:icondodge-the-dog:
I liked this one especially! Short and sweet.

--
"Lemon."

Complaints : [link]

<< :ohnoes::megaphone: Project Reciprocation >>

Details

January 24, 2008
579 bytes

Statistics

14
2 [who?]
208 (0 today)
4 (0 today)

Site Map